Very good story. Everything was organized and flowed together.
Very good story, I like how the neighbor of the victim is the main character.
Very good detail, and a very good job at creating the scene.
I really enjoyed reading this story. It kept my attention and made me want to read faster to see what had happened.
This is a really good story. It flows nicely and I could actually picture the scene.
I didn't get it what happen after he was driving.
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Very good story. Everything was organized and flowed together.
ReplyDeleteVery good story, I like how the neighbor of the victim is the main character.
ReplyDeleteVery good detail, and a very good job at creating the scene.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this story. It kept my attention and made me want to read faster to see what had happened.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good story. It flows nicely and I could actually picture the scene.
ReplyDeleteI didn't get it what happen after he was driving.
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