Wednesday, December 17, 2014

The Death of Michael Brown

https://docs.google.com/a/roanokecityschools.org/document/d/1TVwc7_WydGA1aLp6RHMdWsAtLu3m0E4234BTT3ipl5Q/edit?usp=sharing 
Funeral Procession by Ellis Wilson
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:00 AM

    very good story and great word choice.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    The painting was a great choice for the story. I would enjoy some more actions in the story though.

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  3. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:11 AM

    I loved the way it started, good wording also.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:11 AM

    Very good detail, and also I like the word choices.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:15 AM

    I loved your story, and great choice in words.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 18, 2014 at 11:24 AM

    I loved the story, and great word choice.

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