This was a well organized story it was well blinded with the Mike Brown case. But the only thing was i wish it was longer (very interesting).
It was very interesting and great.
I really liked the way you put the story and the character you used. I do not know anything that you could do to make it better.
Your story was great !
You had a good choice of words and it was well put together I enjoyed it.
I like the characters that u created and how your story resembled the Mike brown situation. I saw a couple grammar errors but there was not that many overall great story
This was a well organized story it was well blinded with the Mike Brown case. But the only thing was i wish it was longer (very interesting).
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting and great.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you put the story and the character you used. I do not know anything that you could do to make it better.
ReplyDeleteYour story was great !
ReplyDeleteYou had a good choice of words and it was well put together I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI like the characters that u created and how your story resembled the Mike brown situation. I saw a couple grammar errors but there was not that many overall great story
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