this picture was scary to me but that is the perfect picture for your story great detail with your story.
Good job being accurate in chronological order, although why didn't Auntie offer a ride to Mike's friend? Try to capitalize more accurately.
You had a very good story and if you would of had more details at the end it would have been great.
You gave out a good topic with good ideas and I enjoyed it good job.
good picture and great story.
You had good ideas, I liked how you did the ending very interesting.
this picture was scary to me but that is the perfect picture for your story great detail with your story.
ReplyDeleteGood job being accurate in chronological order, although why didn't Auntie offer a ride to Mike's friend? Try to capitalize more accurately.
ReplyDeleteYou had a very good story and if you would of had more details at the end it would have been great.
ReplyDeleteYou gave out a good topic with good ideas and I enjoyed it good job.
ReplyDeletegood picture and great story.
ReplyDeleteYou had good ideas, I liked how you did the ending very interesting.
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