I like the way your story is and your character and you had very few grammar mistakes.
I like the way you put the main character in and then the real Ferguson situation. I love they was the story ended.
great job on the story i like how the character believe in his self
Good job, I like how it describe the main character at the beginning of the story.
You had a few mistakes with your grammar but great
I loved your story. It was very interesting and had the real situation included without using Michael Brown as a main character. Not many grammar errors. Great job.
I like the way your story is and your character and you had very few grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put the main character in and then the real Ferguson situation. I love they was the story ended.
ReplyDeletegreat job on the story i like how the character believe in his self
ReplyDeleteGood job, I like how it describe the main character at the beginning of the story.
ReplyDeleteYou had a few mistakes with your grammar but great
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. It was very interesting and had the real situation included without using Michael Brown as a main character. Not many grammar errors. Great job.
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