It was an interesting point of view. it was one of the good ones...
This is a really good story and gives good details. I like the ending.
Very touching love story bro. Good details.
Nice story like the way your character ties into the life of Mike Brown.Overall the plot of the story was good
What was the girl name?
I love the starting of the story about how the girl met Michael Brown. I really enjoyed reading this and the picture goes right along with the story.
It was an interesting point of view. it was one of the good ones...
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good story and gives good details. I like the ending.
ReplyDeleteVery touching love story bro. Good details.
ReplyDeleteNice story like the way your character ties into the life of Mike Brown.
ReplyDeleteOverall the plot of the story was good
What was the girl name?
ReplyDeleteI love the starting of the story about how the girl met Michael Brown. I really enjoyed reading this and the picture goes right along with the story.
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