I like your story and it gives good details, but some of your words like "I" and "Ferguson" are not capitalized.
I enjoy the ending because even though bad things happens, you can always improvise.
I liked the characters you chose and the only thing i saw was simple grammar mistakes.
Nice tittle for your story Ok Then People keep doing the good work
I like your characters, and the only mistakes I saw were with your grammar.
I really enjoyed your story. Ya'll had some supported details too. Ya'll had a few errors such as: spelling, grammar, and spacing. Other than that, it was really great.
I liked the picture, It was pretty long but good.
I like your story and it gives good details, but some of your words like "I" and "Ferguson" are not capitalized.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the ending because even though bad things happens, you can always improvise.
ReplyDeleteI liked the characters you chose and the only thing i saw was simple grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteNice tittle for your story Ok Then People keep doing the good work
ReplyDeleteI like your characters, and the only mistakes I saw were with your grammar.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. Ya'll had some supported details too. Ya'll had a few errors such as: spelling, grammar, and spacing. Other than that, it was really great.
ReplyDeleteI liked the picture, It was pretty long but good.
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